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Message de noixdecoco17 posté le 20-04-2017 à 19:42:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je passe mon oral d'anglais dans 2 semaines et j'aimerais avoir des avis sur ma notion Myths and Heroes pour que je puisse l'améliorer et corriger les fautes.
Merci d'avance
I’m going to talk about the notion of myths and heroes.
First of all, I’m going to give a definition about this notion.
Briefly a myth, it’s a story about gods or heroes who can be a popular belief, a tradition or a false notion. An hero can be a mythological figure. It’s a person admired for his or her achievements, courage and noble qualities. So, mythology includes the legends of our history, our religions, stories of how the world was created and our heroes. There are two types of heroes. The fictitious heroes like Alice in wonderland, James Bond and real heroes who live in our society like Queen Elizabeth II or those who lived in another epoch like Martin Luther King.
What impact do they have on our lives? Why are myths and heroes so important to our society?
In the first one myths and heroes allow to dream, to imagine and in a second part they also allow to follow conducts and ideals of celebrities.
Today, many people like legends, myths, to imagine fabulous and fantastic stories, because the population prefers to flee the reality with these problems. We can flee the reality by looking at movies of fiction, by reading books with superheroes and put ourselves in the place of the main character. We appreciate myths like the one of Alice in wonderland, a famous character in the English culture, who discovers an imaginary world.Or still the adventures of the famous Sherlock Holmes with his fascinating inquiries. Sometimes we would like to have the guile and the intelligence to be able to lead enquiries in the streets of London, or to be an agent to have class and courage of James Bond. Our society, we like becoming identified with heroes who have numerous qualities and a beautiful appearance. Children, teenagers often want to look like their favourite hero as Batman, Harry Potter or a famous singer or an athlete as Michael Jordan.
But , there are men women in reality who showed courage and who became heroes. We would like to be famous celebrities who developed mentalities as Martin Luther King , who defended the cause of the blacks and which fought so that all the world possesses the same rights. The fictitious and the real heroes inspire people everyday thanks to their acts.
It is example for the people and show that to defend just causes and fight for something allows to become a hero.
For example, the americans soldiers of the second world war who fought to deliver France and to win the war became heroes.
So, myths, heroes however is the epoch, were always a member of our daily life and can make us dream that they are fictitious or real.
For me, myths and heroes are so important in ours society because they allow us to escape from our sometimes difficult life and we can take example on them to improve our life even if we have no powers to help the others and to defend values.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-04-2017 23:32
Message de noixdecoco17 posté le 20-04-2017 à 19:42:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je passe mon oral d'anglais dans 2 semaines et j'aimerais avoir des avis sur ma notion Myths and Heroes pour que je puisse l'améliorer et corriger les fautes.
Merci d'avance
I’m going to talk about the notion of myths and heroes.
First of all, I’m going to give a definition about this notion.
Briefly a myth, it’s a story about gods or heroes who can be a popular belief, a tradition or a false notion. An hero can be a mythological figure. It’s a person admired for his or her achievements, courage and noble qualities. So, mythology includes the legends of our history, our religions, stories of how the world was created and our heroes. There are two types of heroes. The fictitious heroes like Alice in wonderland, James Bond and real heroes who live in our society like Queen Elizabeth II or those who lived in another epoch like Martin Luther King.
What impact do they have on our lives? Why are myths and heroes so important to our society?
In the first one myths and heroes allow to dream, to imagine and in a second part they also allow to follow conducts and ideals of celebrities.
Today, many people like legends, myths, to imagine fabulous and fantastic stories, because the population prefers to flee the reality with these problems. We can flee the reality by looking at movies of fiction, by reading books with superheroes and put ourselves in the place of the main character. We appreciate myths like the one of Alice in wonderland, a famous character in the English culture, who discovers an imaginary world.Or still the adventures of the famous Sherlock Holmes with his fascinating inquiries. Sometimes we would like to have the guile and the intelligence to be able to lead enquiries in the streets of London, or to be an agent to have class and courage of James Bond. Our society, we like becoming identified with heroes who have numerous qualities and a beautiful appearance. Children, teenagers often want to look like their favourite hero as Batman, Harry Potter or a famous singer or an athlete as Michael Jordan.
But , there are men women in reality who showed courage and who became heroes. We would like to be famous celebrities who developed mentalities as Martin Luther King , who defended the cause of the blacks and which fought so that all the world possesses the same rights. The fictitious and the real heroes inspire people everyday thanks to their acts.
It is example for the people and show that to defend just causes and fight for something allows to become a hero.
For example, the americans soldiers of the second world war who fought to deliver France and to win the war became heroes.
So, myths, heroes however is the epoch, were always a member of our daily life and can make us dream that they are fictitious or real.
For me, myths and heroes are so important in ours society because they allow us to escape from our sometimes difficult life and we can take example on them to improve our life even if we have no powers to help the others and to defend values.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-04-2017 23:32
Réponse : Notion/Myths and Heroes de laure95, postée le 21-04-2017 à 16:50:04 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- a definition about (pas la bonne préposition)this notion.
- Briefly a myth, it’s: mal construit, pas de reprise de sujet.
- a story about gods or heroes who (pas le bon relatif)can be a popular belief,
- An hero+ an + mot commençant par une voyelle.
- In the first one: ?
- to flee the reality with these problems: ?
- to have (article)class and courage of James Bond.
- (préposition) Our society, we like
- heir favourite hero (mettre au pluriel)as (pas le bon mot)Batman, Harry Potter or a famous singer or an athlete as Michael
- But , there are men women in reality who showed courage and who became (mettre au présent perfect)heroes.
- and which (pas le bon relatif)fought
- It is (article)example for the (pas de the)people
- the americans (pas de s + majuscule)soldiers of the second world war who fought to deliver France and to win (passé) the war became heroes.
- however is the epoch: pas le bon ordre des mots.
- can make us dream that (pas de that)they are fictitious or real.
- in ours (pas de s)society
- no powers (pas de s)
Réponse : Notion/Myths and Heroes de here4u, postée le 21-04-2017 à 21:50:56 (S | E)
hello !
I’m going to talk about the notion of "myths and heroes".
First of all, I’m going to give a definition about this notion.
Briefly a myth, it’s a story about gods or heroes who can be a popular belief,(very clumsy construction!) a tradition or a false notion
. An= h aspiré! hero can be a mythological figure. It’s a person admired for his or her achievements, courage and noble qualities. So, mythology includes the legends of our history, our religions, XXX stories of how the world was created and our heroes. There are two types of heroes. The fictitious heroes like Alice in wonderland, James Bond and real heroes who live= aspect in our society like Queen Elizabeth II or those who lived in another epoch like Martin Luther King.(??? not so long ago!)What impact do they have on our lives? Why are myths and heroes so important to our society?
In the first one
myths and heroes allow = enable us to dream, to imagine and in a second part they also allow to follow XXX conducts and ideals of celebrities. Today, many people like legends, myths, to imagine fabulous and fantastic stories, because the population prefers to flee the reality with these problems.
We can flee the XXX reality by looking at movies of fiction, by reading books with superheroes and put ourselves in the place of the main character. We appreciate myths like the one of Alice in wonderland, a famous character in the English culture, who discovers an imaginary world.Or still the adventures of the famous Sherlock Holmes with his fascinating inquiries. Sometimes we would like to have the guile and the intelligence to be able to lead enquiries in the streets of London, or to be an agent, to have XXX class and courage of James Bond.In? Our society, we like becoming identified with heroes who have numerous qualities and a beautiful appearance. Children, teenagers often want to look like their favourite hero as Batman, Harry Potter or a famous singer or an athlete as Michael Jordan. But , there are men women (in reality: mal placé!)who showed courage and who became heroes. We would like to be famous celebrities who developed mentalities as Martin Luther King , who defended the cause of the blacks and which fought so that all the world possesses the same rights. The fictitious and the real heroes inspire people everyday thanks to their acts.
It is example for the people and show that to defend just causes and fight for something allows to become a hero.Revoir la construction de toute cette phrase ...(What's "it"? - + article + accord éventuel du sujet etc.)
For example, the americans soldiers of the second world war who fought to deliver France and to win the war became heroes.
So, myths, heroes however is the epoch, were always a member of our daily life and can make us dream that they are fictitious or real.
not clear at all!For me, myths and heroes are so important in ours society because they allow us to escape from our sometimes difficult life and we can take example on them to improve our life even if we have no powers to help the others and to defend values.
Réponse : Notion/Myths and Heroes de noixdecoco17, postée le 22-04-2017 à 18:52:03 (S | E)
Bonjour! Merci pour votre aide à tous les deux. J'ai essayé de corriger ma notion grâce à vos indications j'espère que mon texte est un peu plus compréhensible.
Notion: Myths and Heroes
I’m going to talk about the notion of myths and heroes.
First of all, I’m going to give a definition of this notion.
Briefly a myth, is a story about gods or heroes it can be a popular belief or a tradition . A hero can be a mythological figure, and a person admired for his or her, courage and noble qualities. So, mythology includes the legends of our history, our religions, our stories of how the world was created and our heroes. There are two types of heroes. The fictitious heroes like Alice in Wonderland, James Bond and real heroes who live in our society like Martin Luther King.
What impact do they have on our lives? Why are and heroes so important to our society?
In the first part we will see that myths and heroes enable us to dream, to imagine and in a second part they also allow to follow the conducts and ideals of celebrities.
Today, many people like legends, myths, to imagine fabulous and fantastic stories, because the population prefers to escape the real world by looking at movies of fiction, by reading books with superheroes and put ourselves in the place of the main character. We appreciate myths like the one of Alice in wonderland, a famous character in the English culture, who discovers an imaginary world.Or still the adventures of the famous Sherlock Holmes with his fascinating inquiries. Sometimes we would like to have the guile and the intelligence to be able to lead inquiries in the streets of London, or to be an agent to have class and courage of James Bond. In iur society, we like becoming identified with heroes who have numerous qualities and a beautiful appearance. Children, teenagers often want to look like their favourite heroes like Batman, Harry Potter or a famous singer or an athlete like Michael Jordan.
But , there are men women in reality who showed courage and who became heroes. We would like to be famous celebrities who developed mentalities like Martin Luther King , who defended the cause of the blacks and which fought so that all the world possesses the same rights. The fictitious and the real heroes inspire people everyday thanks to their acts.
Heroes are an example for people because they show that we can to defend just causes and to fight for something allows to become a hero.
For instance, the American soldiers of the second world war who fought to deliver France and won the war became heroes.
So, myths, no matter which time, were always a member of our daily life and can make us dream they are fictitious or real.
For me, myths and heroes are so important in our society because they allow us to escape from our sometimes difficult life and we can take example on them to improve our life even if we have no power to help the others and to defend values.
Réponse : Notion/Myths and Heroes de here4u, postée le 22-04-2017 à 22:23:04 (S | E)
Hello !
I’m going to talk about the notion of myths and heroes.
First of all, I’m going to give a definition of this notion.
Briefly a myth, is a story about gods or heroes it can be a popular belief or a tradition . A hero can be a mythological figure, and a person admired for his or her, courage and noble qualities. So, mythology includes the legends of our history, our religions, our stories of how the world was created and our heroes.
There are two types of heroes. The fictitious heroes like Alice in Wonderland, James Bond and real heroes who live in our society like Martin Luther King.What impact do they have on our lives? Why are
and heroes so important to our society?In the first part we will see that myths and heroes enable us to dream, to imagine and in a second part they also allow to follow the conducts and ideals of celebrities.
Today, many people like legends, myths, to imagine fabulous and fantastic stories, because the population prefers to escape the real world by looking at movies of fiction, by reading books with superheroes and put ourselves= people? in the place of the main character.(in the main K's shoes!) We appreciate myths like the one of Alice in wonderland, a famous character in the English culture, who discovers an imaginary world.Or still the adventures of the famous Sherlock Holmes with his fascinating inquiries. Sometimes we would like to have the guile and the intelligence to be able to lead inquiries in the streets of London, or to be an agent to haveXXX class and courage of James Bond. In iur society, we like becoming identified with heroes who have numerous qualities and a beautiful appearance. Children, teenagers often want to look like their favourite heroes like Batman, Harry Potter or a famous singer or an athlete like Michael Jordan.
But , there are men women in reality who showed courage and who became heroes. We would like to be famous celebrities who developed mentalities= not clear! ) like Martin Luther King , who defended the cause of the blacks and which fought so that all the world possesses the same rights. The fictitious and the real heroes inspire people everyday thanks to their acts.
Heroes are an example for people because they show that we can to defend just causes and to fight = le fait de ...)for something allows to become a hero.
For instance, the American soldiers of the second world war who fought to deliver France and won the war became heroes.
So, myths, no matter which time= WHEN, were always a member of our daily life and can make us dream they are fictitious or real.
For me, myths and heroes are so important in our society because they allow us to escape from our sometimes difficult life and we can take example on them to improve our life even if we have no power to help the others and to defend values.
Réponse : Notion/Myths and Heroes de noixdecoco17, postée le 24-04-2017 à 12:29:27 (S | E)
Bonjour, encore merci de ton aide j'ai essayé de corriger mes fautes mais il y en a certaines que je n'arrive pas à rectifier.
I’m going to talk about the notion of myths and heroes.
First of all, I’m going to give a definition of this notion.
Briefly a myth, is a story about gods or heroes it can be a popular belief or a tradition . A hero can be a mythological figure, and a person admired for his or her, courage and noble qualities. So, mythology includes the legends of our history, our religions, our stories of how the world was created and our heroes. There are two types of heroes. The fictitious heroes like Alice in Wonderland, James Bond and real heroes who live in our society like Martin Luther King.
What impact do they have on our lives? Why are myths and heroes so important to our society?
In the first part we will see that myths and heroes enable us to dream, to imagine and in a second part they also allow to follow the conducts and ideals of celebrities.
Today, many people like legends, myths, to imagine fabulous and fantastic stories, because the population prefers to escape the real world by looking at movies of fiction, by reading books with superheroes and put ourselves in the the main character’s place. We appreciate myths like the one of Alice in wonderland, a famous character in the English culture, who discovers an imaginary world.Or still the adventures of the famous Sherlock Holmes with his fascinating inquiries. Sometimes we would like to have the guile and the intelligence to be able to lead inquiries in the streets of London, or to be an agent to have class and courage of James Bond. In our society, we like becoming identified with heroes who have numerous qualities and a beautiful appearance. Children, teenagers often want to look like their favourite heroes like Batman, Harry Potter or a famous singer or an athlete like Michael Jordan.
But , there are men and women in reality who showed courage and who became heroes. We would like to be famous celebrities who change mentalities like Martin Luther King , who defended the cause of the blacks and which fought so that all the world possesses the same rights. The fictitious and the real heroes inspire people everyday thanks to their acts.
Heroes are an example for people because they show that we can to defend just causes and to fight for something allows to become a hero.
For instance, the American soldiers of the second world war who fought to liberate France and won the war became heroes.
So, myths, no matter which time, were always a member of our daily life and can make us dream they are fictitious or real.
For me, myths and heroes are so important in our society because they allow us to escape from our sometimes difficult life and we can take example on them to improve our life even if we have no power to help the others and to defend values.
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