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Message de bbj17 posté le 28-04-2017 à 10:07:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis en seconde et j'ai un texte de 8 à 10 lignes à faire sur la question: Are you afraid of posting personal information on the net?
Pouvez-vous vérifier mon texte?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Am I afraid of posting personal information on the net ? Today, the diffusion of personal information on the net is a problem which is becoming increasingly common !
According to me, I'm not very afraid of posting personal information like my name or some pictures on the net even if I know that some persons could find you just with a name !
However, post personal information like your adress or your telephone number is dangerous because everybody could see these informations ! Maybe a crazy person could meet you in your house..
For instance, my parents are very afraid of posting personal information on the net.. They are very concerned and on one hand I agree with them ! Nevertheless if you don't post your name for example, your friends don't find you on social networks !
To conclude, I'm a bit afraid of posting personal information on the net but we do it anyway without noticing, generally.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2017 10:50
Message de bbj17 posté le 28-04-2017 à 10:07:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis en seconde et j'ai un texte de 8 à 10 lignes à faire sur la question: Are you afraid of posting personal information on the net?
Pouvez-vous vérifier mon texte?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Am I afraid of posting personal information on the net ? Today, the diffusion of personal information on the net is a problem which is becoming increasingly common !
According to me, I'm not very afraid of posting personal information like my name or some pictures on the net even if I know that some persons could find you just with a name !
However, post personal information like your adress or your telephone number is dangerous because everybody could see these informations ! Maybe a crazy person could meet you in your house..
For instance, my parents are very afraid of posting personal information on the net.. They are very concerned and on one hand I agree with them ! Nevertheless if you don't post your name for example, your friends don't find you on social networks !
To conclude, I'm a bit afraid of posting personal information on the net but we do it anyway without noticing, generally.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2017 10:50
Réponse : Expression écrite/aide de laure95, postée le 28-04-2017 à 14:29:25 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- However, post (ajouter -ing) personal information
- these informations: mettre tout au singulier car information est un mot invariable.
- on (mettre un article)one hand I agree with them !
- your friends don't (remplacer par can't)find you on social networks !
- without noticing it)
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