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Message de hjoulie posté le 06-05-2017 à 10:31:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je vais postuler pour un stage en laboratoire au RU et je voulais savoir si ma lettre de motivation était correcte,
Avez vous remarqué des fautes de grammaire ? Améliorations possibles ?
Dear Sir or Madam,
Currently freshman at (mon école), I am looking for a 5 months internship, included in my training, which could start in August or September 2017. This internship aims to develop and apply my technical and theoretical knowledge.
Materials Engineering, Mechanics and Productions are fields that I’m keen on. I wish to acquire a first experience within your laboratory, at (université du laboratoire), that would allow me to invest fully in a project and strengthen my belief into the choice of my vocational training, concerning the field of material engineering.
This internship would be of principle interest for my professional experience, first of all to discover the world of research, work on fields that appeal to me, and to improve my English speaking.
Conscientious, persistent, outgoing and eager to learn, I am accurate in every tasks entrusted to me. I’m interested in new ways of transportation and Aeronautics, by the way I’m also member of a drone’s club in which we are developing drones for a recreational use.
Should you wish to contact me before then, you can reach me via phone or via email. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thanking you most sincerely for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Merci d'avance !
Message de hjoulie posté le 06-05-2017 à 10:31:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je vais postuler pour un stage en laboratoire au RU et je voulais savoir si ma lettre de motivation était correcte,
Avez vous remarqué des fautes de grammaire ? Améliorations possibles ?
Dear Sir or Madam,
Currently freshman at (mon école), I am looking for a 5 months internship, included in my training, which could start in August or September 2017. This internship aims to develop and apply my technical and theoretical knowledge.
Materials Engineering, Mechanics and Productions are fields that I’m keen on. I wish to acquire a first experience within your laboratory, at (université du laboratoire), that would allow me to invest fully in a project and strengthen my belief into the choice of my vocational training, concerning the field of material engineering.
This internship would be of principle interest for my professional experience, first of all to discover the world of research, work on fields that appeal to me, and to improve my English speaking.
Conscientious, persistent, outgoing and eager to learn, I am accurate in every tasks entrusted to me. I’m interested in new ways of transportation and Aeronautics, by the way I’m also member of a drone’s club in which we are developing drones for a recreational use.
Should you wish to contact me before then, you can reach me via phone or via email. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thanking you most sincerely for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Merci d'avance !
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