Bonjour, je postule actuellement pour Erasmus pour partir en Finlande, j'ai réalisé une lettre de motivation en anglais et je recherche des personnes pouvant la critiquer, trouver des fautes...etc. Je vous en serai très reconnaissant de m'aider , juste une petite précision, c'est pour une école d'ingénieurs donc n'hésitez pas, même si çà paraît insignifiant

Dear Sir, Dear Madam
Presently a third year student in the engineer school in electronic and computing xxx at xxx, I would like to make an exchange for the Erasmus program. To have the occasion to study abroad for a few months represent for me an enormous opportunity, with the current European Union extension and the disappearance of the border between European countries.To possess adaptation and opening abilities on the world are, as my mind, indispensable qualities for my future profession in the engineering. Consequently, a semester spent abroad allows me to acquire a bigger maturity through a different living environment and to discover by the same way another vision of engineering schools’ studies. 

Finland is a country which attracts me, due to its history, its culture, its geographical situation, but also the mentality of people who live there. I study English since the school, and I realized that the best way to master a language was to go in a country to communicate with the inhabitants, and to be confronted with their way of life, as well as their traditions and their culture.I am an autonomous, serious, dynamic, organized and competent person.  The idea to be into a new environment to pursue my studies represents for me a real motivation. I know several students who had some experiences with the program Erasmus in various countries of Europe; all came back delighted and assured me that they enriched themselves as well on the personal plan as the professional.

Yours faithfully,