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Message de aureliie59 posté le 15-03-2011 à 13:07:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
j'aurais aimé avoir votre avis sur le texte que j'ai fait en anglais. Je dois continuer un script.
Je vous explique le début de l'histoire. Alice et Milo sont ensemble et Alice a préparé un repas pour Milo mais celui pense qu'elle a essayé de l'empoisonner..
Merci pour vos réponses.
(They start eating there chinese food.
When Milo didn't smells poison, he think of remember great moments and to arrange the situation.)
MILO: Oh my dear, I enjoy eating what do you have prepare to me, and I thank you for caring me.
ALICE: (She smiles)
You're welcome, all afternoon preparing this chenese meal for you, preparing this with pleasure.
MILO: Did you remember the first time we have seen each other? You was wearing a beautiful red dress
ALICE: (She feels uncomfortable.)
Yes, I choose to wear it because it's your favorite colour. It's unforgetable. Promise me to be honest, since how many time are you unfaithful?
MILO: (he seems surprised)
Me? I have never been unfaithful. Valentine is just a friend of work.
(Suddenly Milo feels a pain in his stomach, and he fall on the ground.)
ALICE: Oh my god, what the hell I have done? I must call the emergency. Excuse Milo, I think you wad cheating with Valentine so I decide to poison in your food. I hope to repair all this.
(10 minutes later emergency take Milo to the hospital)
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-03-2011 13:13
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Message de aureliie59 posté le 15-03-2011 à 13:07:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
j'aurais aimé avoir votre avis sur le texte que j'ai fait en anglais. Je dois continuer un script.
Je vous explique le début de l'histoire. Alice et Milo sont ensemble et Alice a préparé un repas pour Milo mais celui pense qu'elle a essayé de l'empoisonner..
Merci pour vos réponses.
(They start eating there chinese food.
When Milo didn't smells poison, he think of remember great moments and to arrange the situation.)
MILO: Oh my dear, I enjoy eating what do you have prepare to me, and I thank you for caring me.
ALICE: (She smiles)
You're welcome, all afternoon preparing this chenese meal for you, preparing this with pleasure.
MILO: Did you remember the first time we have seen each other? You was wearing a beautiful red dress
ALICE: (She feels uncomfortable.)
Yes, I choose to wear it because it's your favorite colour. It's unforgetable. Promise me to be honest, since how many time are you unfaithful?
MILO: (he seems surprised)
Me? I have never been unfaithful. Valentine is just a friend of work.
(Suddenly Milo feels a pain in his stomach, and he fall on the ground.)
ALICE: Oh my god, what the hell I have done? I must call the emergency. Excuse Milo, I think you wad cheating with Valentine so I decide to poison in your food. I hope to repair all this.
(10 minutes later emergency take Milo to the hospital)
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-03-2011 13:13
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Réponse: Correction script de may, postée le 16-03-2011 à 02:01:50 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
(They start eating there chinese food.
When Milo didn't smells poison, he think of remember great moments and to arrange the situation/pour reviser, pas de sens
MILO: Oh my dear, I enjoy eating whatever (do) you have prepare/participe passé to/autre préposition me, and I thank you for caring me.( take care of...)
ALICE: (She smiles)
You're welcome, all afternoon besoin sujet et reviser le temps du verbe preparing this chenese meal for you,(preparing this) with pleasure.
MILO: Did/ temps présent you remember the first time we have seen each other? You was wearing a beautiful red dress.
ALICE: (She feels uncomfortable.)
Yes, I choose to wear it because it's your favorite colour. It's unforgetable. Promise me to be honest, (since) how many time/pluriel are you unfaithful.....? ou Since when
MILO: (he seems surprised)
Me? I have never been unfaithful.......idée manquant Valentine is just a friend of/autre mot work.
(Suddenly Milo feels a pain in his stomach, and he fall/singulier on the ground.)
ALICE: Oh my god, what/to be the hell I have done? I must call the emergency. Excuse..../ou sorry Milo, I think you wad cheating with Valentine so I decide to verbe poison in your food (ou to poison you). I hope to repair/pas le bon verbe all this.
(10 minutes later emergency/ambulance?? take Milo to the hospital)
Hope this helps!
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Modifié par may le 16-03-2011 02:02
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